and I fell

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by SilverLightning (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 2:06:49

a single word from the bow of your lips
a single laugh like the falling of the rain
a single breath like the touch of a snowflake
and I fell

I felt the softness of your touch
I heard the sweetness of your voice
I saw the starlight of your eyes
and I fell

your lips drew me in
your beauty bound me tight
your passion captured me
and I fell

I fell into the sunlight of your smile
I fell into the alebaster of your skin
I fell into the depths of your eyes
and never again shall I rise

I shall forever sink
I shall forever dive
I shall forever float
and into your beauty
I shall always fall

Post 2 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 2:10:17

Cody, so pretty. omg i dont know what to say. touching. i teared up a little. this is the first poem of yours i've read. i love it

Post 3 by SilverLightning (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 2:11:43

Aww, kayla, thank you, I'm glad you like it.

Post 4 by midnight sun (you can't catch me, i'm the palobread man) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 7:04:45

this is such a beautiful thing

Post 5 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 15:38:31

awwww so romantic cody. great job!

Post 6 by MBULLET4058 (awww. see? i knew my opinion mattered to you!) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 22:08:55

omg, cody! wow! it's so beautiful. that's all i can say.

Post 7 by Maiden of the Moonlight (Zone BBS is my Life) on Tuesday, 19-Oct-2010 22:58:05

awwww, that was nice. good job cody. dont know much else to say, but nicely done.

Post 8 by AgateRain (Believe it or not, everything on me and about me is real!) on Wednesday, 20-Oct-2010 20:03:14

Cody, that was the most stupid thing I've ever read!

No, seriously, that was pretty and I would like to see more.